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regshoe ([personal profile] regshoe) wrote 2023-09-21 06:07 pm (UTC)

I enjoyed some of the complications of the time travel, but perhaps it starts to fall apart if one thinks about it in more depth. I did think Grace's actions during the climax were a bit puzzling, and that's part of the general frustrations of her character! And for the most part I liked how quietly built-up the romance was—I enjoy that sort of subtlety—though OTOH it certainly could have been developed in a bit more detail.

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