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Dr. Zook ([personal profile] dr_zook) wrote in [personal profile] regshoe 2021-10-04 06:34 pm (UTC)

I love how you break down the main characters here, haha! ♥

I think I also warm to Ewen, the Ideal Man, more in these chapters than in the prologue, because the admiration for his manifold good qualities feels like it's coming from Keith instead of directly from the omniscient narrator.

Very good point, same here. :)

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