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regshoe ([personal profile] regshoe) wrote 2022-08-28 11:57 am (UTC)

That sounds good! The only thing is you don't mention the hurt/comfort, which (at least to my mind!) is a major draw of the book. Perhaps you could add something like, '...Laurent meets Aymar again, severely wounded and under suspicion of treason. As Laurent nurses him back to health, the evidence against Aymar seems to become worse and worse...'?

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