regshoe: Close-up of a woman, Jannet from NTS Kidnapped, wearing a bonnet and shawl; she holds her chin in one hand and pulls a frowning face (Jannet hmmm)
[personal profile] regshoe
It's been a while since I've done any of this figuring-out-canon-details meta, and writing this reminded me how much fun it can be :)

Anyway: where is the house of Shaws?

The first thing we hear about the location of the house of Shaws is that it's 'not far from Cramond'. In chapter 2 David walks along the Glasgow road west of Edinburgh and enters Cramond parish; the description of his journey after this point is not very geographically detailed, but it is long enough to make clear that he travels some distance before reaching the house. When he does get there, the surroundings are described thus:
...a great bulk of building standing very bare upon a green in the bottom of the next valley. The country was pleasant round about, running in low hills, pleasantly watered and wooded, and the crops, to my eyes, wonderfully good... all set with hawthorn bushes full of flowers; the fields dotted with sheep; a fine flight of rooks in the sky; and every sign of a kind soil and climate...

Importantly, there's no mention of the sea; Cramond itself is right on the coast, so we're not very near the village. Again, in chapter 5 David wants to go to Queensferry because 'I wished for a nearer view of the sea and ships' (than he got from the hill above Edinburgh at the beginning of chapter 2, the only time the sea has been mentioned thus far).

Here is the area in question:

I haven't been able to determine the exact historical extent of Cramond parish, but the 1794 map suggests that at least most of it is east of the River Almond (with a little bit west of the river to the north—too near the sea for Shaws, probably). The 'road to Stirling' in the 1794 map is the Glasgow road.

The route between Shaws and Queensferry, taken in chapter 5 and back again in chapter 29, is again not described in detail, but we do get the information that a northwest wind is blowing 'nearly in our faces'. Queensferry is on a bearing of approximately 280º from Cramond village, i.e. much closer to due west than northwest: more evidence that Shaws is south/inland from Cramond.

Now, because we're almost certainly east of the river, the characters would have to cross it to get to Queensferry, and the obvious place to do this is Cramond Bridge at NT1796475497. Queensferry is on a bearing of about 300º from the bridge, much closer to northwest, and the road runs pretty much directly there, so I think this is the route taken. The river bends upstream of the bridge to run west-east, but I don't think we can be very much further west than the bridge, as the route to Queensferry would then become too long (a bit more than three miles from the bridge) and circuitous (no longer consistently close to northwest, or at all if they crossed by a different bridge further west).

Finally, in chapter 30 David and Alan head towards Edinburgh from Shaws via 'the by-way over Corstorphine Hill'.

Putting all these clues together, the house of Shaws is:
  • Near Cramond
  • Not very near the sea
  • An appreciable distance away from the Glasgow road
  • East of the River Almond
  • Not very far west of Cramond Bridge
  • West of Corstorphine Hill


This confines us to a fairly small area, and here is my very approximate drawing of it:





Most of this area now is modern housing estates, with a sizeable chunk being golf courses and then a smaller area covered by the Cammo Estate Local Nature Reserve, an eighteenth-century park (of which I may say more in a later post, as Cammo is possibly, among specific real houses, the most comparable to the house of Shaws).

One more point is worth mentioning. In the suburb of Clermiston, just west of Corstorphine Hill, is a cluster of streets named after characters and locations from Kidnapped. There's Essendean Place and Essendean Terrace, Hoseason Gardens, Ransome Gardens, Glenure Loan, Torrance Park and—my personal favourite—Alan Breck Gardens.* Imagine living on Alan Breck Gardens. I can't find any information about the rationale behind this—searching the street names just brings up property listings and so on—but this area is within my rough boundary for where Shaws could be: might it be that whoever was responsible for these names was acting on the belief that this is where the house stood??? Possibly, but I think the proximity to Corstorphine Hill (known as a significant place for the book; the statue is there, after all!) is probably more important.


*I discovered this early in my Kidnapped fannish life when, not knowing whether Essendean was a real place or not, I searched for it on Open Street Map and this was the only result.

Date: Apr. 13th, 2025 03:45 pm (UTC)
muccamukk: Wanda walking away, surrounded by towering black trees, her red cloak bright. (Default)
From: [personal profile] muccamukk
I love this! I really appreciated the post about Crammond House, also. Seems like there's bits and pieces of a bunch of things.

Date: Apr. 14th, 2025 10:38 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] garonne

This is so interesting! I am quite convinced by your reasoning as you zoom in on that little area.

Imagine living on Alan Breck Gardens.

Haha, that would very cool.

Date: Apr. 25th, 2025 08:17 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] garonne

What do you think about Illieston House as a model for Shaws?

I was going through this booklet

https://www.westlothian.gov.uk/media/53907/Country-Houses-Booklet-Summer-2022/pdf/Country_Houses.pdf

and my eye was immediately caught by the square stair-tower!

I like it a lot (I mean, not necessarily as inspiration for RLS, but in any case as something that fits my own mental image of the house very well.)

Date: Apr. 28th, 2025 11:35 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] garonne

Yeah, I admit that when I'm picturing Shaws, I don't picture it as "five storeys + attics" high, but only three or four. That's just so tall!

(Actually, I had a little poke around on the internet, just to find an example of what that would even look like, and could not find any examples of five-storeyed 18th-century houses in Scotland at all. Though no doubt there are some somewhere...)

Date: Apr. 14th, 2025 06:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] luzula
Very cool! I like your detective work. And comparing the old and the modern map reminds me of similar places in Sweden on the outskirts of cities, where modern housing has replaced the old agricultural or wooded landscape. : (

Cramond Bridge at NT1796475497
Is this some British way of giving a location?

Date: Apr. 14th, 2025 07:13 pm (UTC)
luzula: a Luzula pilosa, or hairy wood-rush (Default)
From: [personal profile] luzula
it's the National Grid system
Ah, I see! I've never seen a system like that which is given in just one number, instead of two (for east/west and north/south). But I suppose it's just a different way of organizing the information.

Date: Apr. 15th, 2025 10:11 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] starshipfox
I can't believe that I have been to Clermiston multiple times but never knew about the street names! I would've gone to Alan Breck Gardens, had I known ;)

This is great research, thank you for sharing.

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