regshoe: A grey heron in flight over water (Heron)
I am leaving Flight of the Heron fandom completely. I'm sorry; I'd hoped it wouldn't come to this, but it's not somewhere I can be happy staying any more.

From here on, I will not be posting or reading new fic, posting here about the book or generally talking about it or engaging with the fandom. My existing fanworks, Dreamwidth posts and the stuff on yejacobitesbyname will stay where they are. I've used Dreamwidth filtering and my keyword-blocking extension to ensure I won't see posts about it.

I think it's also sensible to put The Wounded Name and "Mr Rowl" under a similar ban, but will not abandon Broster entirely: I'm continuing working on the St Hilda's papers, and still intend to read The Captain's Lady at some point. Besides that, I'll be careful about how I engage with other fandoms, including Kidnapped, and about what new fandoms I get into in future.

It's coming up on five years now since I first read the book, and being in fandom for it has brought me a lot of joy in that time. Thank you all for all you've contributed to that. I still love the book, and I'll treasure those memories.
regshoe: A grey heron in flight over water (Heron)
At long last, here it is. Aww, I am pleased to have made an ebook of such a favourite as this. :)

The Gutenberg uploader volunteers were particularly speedy this time; the ebook was up and on the site about four hours after I submitted it this morning, so that was a nice surprise! Many thanks to them, and to [personal profile] sanguinity for proofreading.

I have also made my own cover image for this ebook. Gutenberg ebooks can use a picture of the actual book's cover as the cover image only if it has the title and author's name on it, but many old books don't (having them on the spine instead), and FotH is one of these. In that case you can use a scan of the title page, but that's not terribly visually interesting, and I wanted my fave to have a nice-looking cover; so I made this one, trying to imitate the appearance of the original book while adding the title and author's name in an attractive style.

Now, I could have thought this was a bit redundant, there of course already being a free ebook on Faded Page. But I don't think so. Partly this is because Gutenberg is a far more well-known site; people will check there for ebooks who don't know about and wouldn't think to look on Faded Page, and more people will have the opportunity to stumble across it on Gutenberg. But another reason is that the two ebooks are based on different editions of the printed book—my Gutenberg ebook uses the 1925 first edition, while the Faded Page one uses an edition from 1932—and this gave me the chance to compare the texts side-by-side (using an R script) and see what changes Broster made to the text between those dates!

Here is what I found... )
regshoe: A grey heron in flight over water (Heron)
...It was a slight surprise to see that I had a gift in an exchange I hadn't signed up for, but it was a very good surprise, and it is a very lovely fic. Highly recommend for all fans of Flight of the Heron and beautiful bird imagery :)

The Flight of the Geese (903 words) by Anonymous
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: The Jacobite Trilogy | The Flight of the Heron Series - D. K. Broster
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: Ewen Cameron/Keith Windham
Characters: Ewen Cameron
Additional Tags: Post-Canon, Character Death Fix, Daydreaming, Birds, Trick or Treat: Treat
Summary:

Ewen flies south with the migrating geese.

regshoe: A Jacobite white rose (White rose)
That Loyalty of Friendship. Being the Adventures of David Balfour, Ewen Cameron and other Notable Persons in and about the Year 1753: How Keith Windham saw a Quarrel made and mended; how Mr Balfour took a bold Step, and suffer’d a great Misfortune, in which there was yet a great Happiness; the History of Alan Breck Stewart and Dr Archibald Cameron, with divers other Jacobites; of Falsehood and Truth in Friendship and Politics; and treating also of Amity and Love between Jacobite and Whig.

At Ye Jacobites By Name | On AO3
Fandoms: Kidnapped (book), The Flight of the Heron
Relationships: Ewen/Keith, Alan/David
Characters: Ewen Cameron, Keith Windham, Alan Breck Stewart, David Balfour, Archibald Cameron, with various other canonical, historical and original characters in minor roles
Rating: T
Content warnings: Major character death (spoilery details are available in the beginning notes)
Length: 118,175 words*

*The AO3 work does not include the prologue, which I posted separately, but does include the endnotes, which I had to make into their own chapter because they're too long to go in the actual endnotes section. Hence the discrepancy in wordcounts.

This fic began in June last year in Glen Nevis, if I remember correctly, where [personal profile] luzula and I were discussing FotH fic ideas; she floated the idea of a Kidnapped crossover, and this seeming promising, challenged me to write it. I thought this was all very intriguing and began turning the idea over in my mind; and in August, having finished the other things I was working on at the time, I started to write it. Throughout 2022 I'd been stretching my writing muscles, gradually writing longer and plottier fics, and by now I felt up to the challenge of something that would clearly be significantly longer and plottier yet. And so here, somewhat more than a year later, it is: not only my longest fic to date but more than five times longer than the next one before that, which is kind of mind-boggling.

(Right, [personal profile] luzula, you have to write that Flemington crossover now :D )

Both [personal profile] luzula and [personal profile] sanguinity have been utterly amazing beta readers, and I cannot thank them enough. ♥ Also deserving a mention is NTS Kidnapped, which really has done a great deal for my general spirits this year as well as keeping up my fannish love for Kidnapped; you may spot a reference or two in the fic. :)

I think I will not write another longfic for a little while! Although I've really enjoyed writing this, it has been frustrating having other ideas popping up and not being able to fit in writing them around the longfic, as well as having to limit participation in exchanges. I have various shorter ideas percolating, and in any case intend to spend the next couple of months writing loads of fic for Yuletide.
regshoe: A Jacobite white rose (White rose)
Well, here we go! This is the prologue of my Flight of the Heron/Kidnapped crossover longfic, which is about 117,000 words long and which I hope to post shortly under the title

That Loyalty of Friendship. Being the Adventures of David Balfour, Ewen Cameron and other Notable Persons in and about the Year 1753: How Keith Windham saw a Quarrel made and mended; how Mr Balfour took a bold Step, and suffer’d a great Misfortune, in which there was yet a great Happiness; the History of Alan Breck Stewart and Dr Archibald Cameron, with divers other Jacobites; of Falsehood and Truth in Friendship and Politics; and treating also of Amity and Love between Jacobite and Whig.

(I had a great struggle trying to come up with a title, but realised I was taking the wrong approach: what it really needed was a mock-eighteenth-century overly-long title in the style of Kidnapped itself! I'm quite pleased with this one.)

I decided to post the prologue as a separate work on AO3, as motivation for myself, a preview for you, and to preserve the chapter numbering (I don't think AO3 will let me call the second 'chapter' Chapter 1). It's not posted on the website yet, as there'll be no need to separate out the prologue there and I still need to figure out the structure and HTML coding for the rest of it.

Prologue: A Meeting on the Road (1263 words) by regshoe
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Kidnapped - Robert Louis Stevenson, The Flight of the Heron - D. K. Broster
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Characters: David Balfour, Alan Breck Stewart, Ewen Cameron
Additional Tags: Crossover, Missing Scene, Post-Canon
Series: Part 1 of That Loyalty of Friendship
Summary:

On their way through Appin after fleeing from the scene of the Red Fox's murder, David and Alan meet a familiar friend.


:)

In Memoriam

Sep. 1st, 2023 12:50 pm
regshoe: Illustration of lilac flowers and leaves (How do they rise up)
I may have mentioned before that, after D. K. Broster's death in 1950, Gertrude Schlich placed an 'In Memoriam' notice in The Times on the anniversary every year until her own death in 1969. (IIRC it was [personal profile] ethelmay who first found this out—thank you!) I had come across a couple of these notices in my biographical researches, but only now decided to have a properly thorough look in The Times Digital Archive for all of them—and I found them, indeed there every year on 7 February (or the 8th, in years when the 7th fell on a Sunday) from 1951 to 1968.

From 1952 onwards the notices all have very similar wording; they're all minor variations on this:
BROSTER.—To the dear memory of DOROTHY KATHLEEN (D. K. Broster), who died on the 7th February, 1950.—G.S.

But the very first one, from 7 February 1951, one year after Broster's death, is quite different.

Here's what it says:
BROSTER.—To the dear memory of D.K.B., died Feb. 7, 1950. “Gone . . . where an enemy never entered, and from whence a friend never went away.”

regshoe: Redwing, a brown bird with a red wing patch, perched in a tree (Default)
[community profile] raremaleslashex creators have revealed!

My lovely Armadale gift was by [archiveofourown.org profile] isevsianne, whose writing I am very happy to have been introduced to here—thank you :)

The excellent Kidnapped fic was by [personal profile] verecunda, which I correctly guessed! And the also excellent FotH fic was by [personal profile] garonne, which I did not guess at first, but decided was more likely thinking it over afterwards.

I was very happy to see The Longest Journey, an obscure fave of mine for years and years that I'd never worked up the courage to write fic for, in the tagset, and so I finally got to write it when I matched to [personal profile] phantomtomato. :D And I loved re-reading the book and writing this happy fix-it for Rickie and Stewart.

The Circle at the Centre (2550 words) by regshoe
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: The Longest Journey - E.M. Forster
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: Stewart Ansell/Rickie Elliot
Characters: Stewart Ansell, Rickie Elliot
Additional Tags: Getting Together, Implied Fix-It
Summary:

An evening in the Ansell home after Rickie’s return there; or, Stewart develops his philosophy.



As for the book itself, my re-read has generated thoughts which I will write about here at some point—for now, here's an out-of-context excerpt which some of you may find amusing:

Cropped photo of a book page reading: “Then he’s done for,” said Widdrington. “He’s dead.” “He’s trying to like Hornblower.” The others gave shrill agonised cries.

[er, this book was published in 1907; that's not Forester's Hornblower, to be clear!]

[community profile] raremaleslashex includes art and podfic as well as fic, and it suddenly occurred to me when I was signing up that hey, I record podfic, I could offer podfic! So I did; obviously I ended up matching on fic, but I thought it would be fun to do one or two short podfic treats, and thinking over the two Flight of the Heron requests and the stories I had in mind as possibilities for podficcing, I hit upon the elegant idea of recording one of [personal profile] garonne's and one of [personal profile] sanguinity's stories, each as a gift for the other. :D

[Podfic] Comfort Me With Apples (9 words) by regshoe
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: The Flight of the Heron - D. K. Broster
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: Ewen Cameron/Keith Windham
Characters: Ewen Cameron, Keith Windham
Additional Tags: Epistolary, Codes & Ciphers, Established Relationship, Long-Distance Relationship, Podfic, Podfic Length: 10-20 Minutes
Summary:

'Then it must be a cipher that none will suspect as a cipher,' Ewen answered stubbornly. 'Surely we can manage that.'

On the eve of war, Keith and Ewen devise a code to keep their letters private.



[Podfic] Ostend (9 words) by regshoe
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: The Flight of the Heron - D. K. Broster
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: Ewen Cameron/Keith Windham
Additional Tags: Alternate Universe - Canon Divergence, Character Death Fix, Podfic, Podfic Length: 10-20 Minutes
Summary:

Keith and Ewen meet on neutral ground, in an inn on the Flemish coast.



Exchange podfic is kind of a strange thing, because obviously it's not at all anonymous if one is creating for people who've heard one's podfic before (podficcing for a stranger in a new fandom might be different!). I like the mystery and speculation of the anon period with writing (even when it's not that much of a mystery), and I think I would feel unsatisfied with podfic as my only work in a multi-medium exchange, so doing these as treats worked very well.

Then I had to scramble at the last minute of posting them to find a way of uploading the files anonymously—box.com, my usual site, shows your username on shared files and I couldn't figure out a way to get it not to. Happily I recalled that Fastmail provides file sharing as well as email, and it doesn't show your email address, so that worked; and in fact I think I like the interface and aesthetic better than box.com, so I may just use Fastmail anyway in future.
regshoe: A Jacobite white rose (White rose)
I was delighted to learn that Big Country, whose song 'In a Big Country' featured very memorably in NTS Kidnapped, have another song that's actually about the Appin Murder:



Lyrics here. The first part of the song is from the perspective of the murderer—though avoids any actual statement of identity—and the POV then shifts to James of the Glens. I think 'John, John' refers to John Beg and John More Maccoll, two servants of James's who were examined as witnesses during his trial (and treated shamefully by the prosecution). Also note the prominent use of the word 'kidnapped', which I take it is a reference :D

Thanks to [personal profile] troisoiseaux for this: details of a Jacobite drinking glass in the Met Museum, New York. The inscription is a version of 'God Save the King' with Jacobite lyrics—the song was only just being adopted as the national anthem around this time, and apparently there were both Jacobite and Hanoverian versions in existence before the Hanoverians made it an official thing.

Thanks to [personal profile] scintilla10 for this: Miss Broster Comes to the Highlands. I wasn't sure quite what to do with this fascinating article, but it will be very much of interest to some of you, so I've just put it up on the website. It's a lovely little glimpse of what Broster was like as a person, as well as her travels in Scotland in connection with her Jacobite fiction—how good to hear that she had 'the loveliest speaking voice'!

I don't know how reliable this kind of technology is, but pretty interesting: Death masks recreate face of Bonnie Prince Charlie. I like how he looks! And it is reasonably like his portraits, which would seem to be a sign of reliability.
regshoe: (Reading 1)
[community profile] raremaleslashex has revealed, and I have received this utterly lovely Armadale fic. I had high hopes from the 'Birds' tag, and it does not disappoint—with the ornithology and some really adorable shippiness, this is a lovely Allan/Ozias story and perfectly tailored to me. <3 I do not think the author is anyone I know, so I'm curious to find out their identity!

A call from the orchards (2384 words) by Anonymous
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Armadale - Wilkie Collins
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: Main Allan Armadale/Ozias Midwinter | Allan Armadale
Characters: Main Allan Armadale, Ozias Midwinter | Allan Armadale
Additional Tags: Sharing a Bed, Birds, Friends to Lovers, Fluff, Insomnia, Post-Canon, Cuddling
Summary:

Ozias Midwinter has trouble sleeping; this he has long known and accepted.

His friend Allan Armadale is keen to aid him.




Further recs )
regshoe: Close-up of a grey heron, its beak open as if laughing (Heron 2)
I'm working my way slowly through correcting the text for my Flight of the Heron ebook, and the chapters set in Edinburgh presented me with a very nice opportunity for a fluffy Ewen/Keith future ficlet... This is set in the AU future of my Kidnapped crossover WIP, so consider it a sort of preview for that story!

A Valued Gift
Read at Ye Jacobites By Name | Read at Squidgeworld
Fandom: The Flight of the Heron
Relationship: Ewen Cameron/Keith Windham
Characters: Keith Windham, Ewen Cameron
Rating: G
Content warnings: None
Word count: 1,066
Summary: Huddled in his enemy’s own cloak (for its real ownership, luckily for his peace of mind, he never discovered)... —In a happier future, Keith gets a chance to discover where the cloak Ewen gave him in Edinburgh really came from.

I have posted and linked to the story on my website and on Squidgeworld.
Thoughts on the AO3 Situation and posting thereI will post to AO3 as well in a few days or so. Given everything that's been going on I'm feeling increasingly unhappy about posting there, or certainly about treating it as The Place to Post Fic, especially with the much more serious wider problems coming on top of the existing issues for FotH and Kidnapped fandom. OTOH using and posting on AO3 isn't really materially supporting the site management the way it would be for a profit-making site owned by a corporation, so it's not a serious moral issue; and it is still pretty much a central place for fandom, and—I'm thinking especially of people in the Tumblr side of FotH fandom here—I don't want people who are in or on the edges of the fandom but who are not on Dreamwidth and not familiar with either the developments about AO3 or what alternative sites I and others might be posting on to miss things. (Whether new FotH fans, not connected to the existing fandom at all, will ever find fic archived on AO3 under a title they may well not even know is another question, of course, but I've made my feelings about that plain enough already.) So I'm experimenting with compromises, and this seems like a good one for now: keep posting to AO3, but prioritise other places first.
regshoe: Close-up of a grey heron, its beak open as if laughing (Heron 2)
Fandabi Dozi's Youtube channel, about wilderness survival and historical crafts and practices in the Scottish Highlands, is a really excellent resource for my fandoms, as well as being fascinating in its own right. I highly recommend checking out the videos if you've not come across it before! And I wanted to recommend one recent video which is of especial relevance. He's testing out the claim made by Edward Burt in his Letters from the North of Scotland that Highlanders sometimes deliberately wet their plaids when rolling up in them to sleep outdoors, because it actually kept them warmer in cold weather. Burt was very probably one of the sources D. K. Broster used in writing The Flight of the Heron, and she repeats this claim:
But Ewen, without stiffness, declined, saying that a wet plaid was of no consequence, and indeed but kept one the warmer. Some, he added, and the Englishman gasped at the information, wrung them out at night in water for that reason.
(chapter 1.6)

But of course historical sources—and perhaps especially outsiders like Burt, who may misinterpret or misunderstand things, or just be lied to—are not necessarily reliable... It's really cool to see a practical experiment of a historical statement like this, and the video is lots of fun!

regshoe: Close-up of a grey heron, its beak open as if laughing (Heron 2)
Ye Jacobites By Name

(which title I have already discovered was a bad idea, because I get the song stuck in my head whenever I look at it. But I think it suits!)

I have been having a lot of fun putting this together, working out my aesthetic taste in CSS and organising everything. Currently the contents include all my fic for FotH, Kidnapped and other related canons (organised under the correct titles! freed from the tyranny of wrangling policy!); various bits of meta and some things about the books, including the timeline; and some other Jacobite stuff, including a historical summary written by [personal profile] luzula.

Of particular interest amongst things that haven't already been posted here: a collection of reviews of The Flight of the Heron's early editions, compiled while I was doing research for the Wikipedia article; and a catalogue of all the old Jacobite novels currently within my ken.

There is of course way more I'd like to add! I hope the website will provide a good structure to motivate me to keep working on meta and background research, and just putting it together has already generated several ideas. Also I want to add more of the biographical material I've dug up on D. K. Broster, but that currently exists in the form of some highly disorganised notes that'll take a while to sort out into anything coherent.

Neocities has been really pretty easy to get set up on; the website is just there when you make your account, there's a very nice comprehensible HTML editor and most things have been intuitive to figure out. It tells me the site has had 331 views since I first created it on Wednesday, which strikes me as slightly doubtful since this is the first I've said to anyone about it—perhaps, unlike AO3, it counts logged-in views by me, since there certainly have been a lot of those. The only real snag I've hit so far is that photos hosted on Dreamwidth are not showing up properly. This is clearly a problem with Neocities or how the images are formatted there, because the same photos show up perfectly when I load the page as an HTML file on my computer, and it's clearly a problem with these images in particular and not with Neocities, because photos hosted on Wikimedia Commons and formatted in exactly the same way are showing up fine, so I'm slightly stumped. Hopefully I manage to figure it out soon. ETA: Thanks to everyone who commented about Dreamwidth's onsite-only image display! Touch wood, the Geography article is now sorted out. Besides that there are various bits of messiness and the site as a whole is still very much under construction—I want to add a proper menu and improve navigability, and perhaps decorate a bit more.

It'll be a good ongoing project!

Thanks very much to [personal profile] luzula and [personal profile] hyarrowen, some of whose writing and photos appear on the site :)
regshoe: A grey heron in flight over water (Heron)
These are some more thoughts arising out of the research I did to put together the FotH Wikipedia article, which involved sorting through decades' worth of writing about and references to The Flight of the Heron on the Internet Archive and other places. Going through the sources over time like this, one gets a broad sweep of general opinion about the book, and a view of how ideas about it have developed over time. So here are some of the more interesting things I've found... )
regshoe: A woman in a black Victorian-style dress, holding an acoustic guitar and raising one hand to the audience (Frances)
Well, now that the busyness of hosting WED is over, I'm taking a review of the other fannish things I have going on and trying to do some sorting out. So! At the moment I am working on:

  • My Flight of the Heron/Kidnapped crossover longfic! I'm on chapter 17 at the moment and the total wordcount has just passed 90,000; I think I've got another four or five chapters to go, give or take a little epiloguing, which suggests a final wordcount somewhere in the 110-120k range. This is exciting! There are definitely plot difficulties, but I am making steady progress working through them and keeping going (very much thanks to beta feedback from the excellent [personal profile] sanguinity and [personal profile] luzula). If all continues well, I'm fairly comfortably on track for my goal of getting to 'only final edits needed' stage within this year.
  • Another meta post resulting from the FotH Wikipedia research. This one has been fully written up for months, I just haven't got round to posting it; I will soon.
  • A meta post about the textual history of Kidnapped. Also mostly written, needs a bit more polishing.
  • The Flight of the Heron ebook! This has slowed to a crawl due to various technological problems, but I'm now three-quarters of the way through scanning and OCR-ing the text and hoping to make a final push on the last quarter soon. And then will follow the pleasant text-corrections stage in which I get to read FotH again. :D
  • A Wikipedia article on NTS Kidnapped. ♥
  • A vague plan to make my own fansite, probably over on Neocities. This is an idea I've had for some time, resulting from a convergence of 'I love all this cool HTML and CSS I'm learning for ebooking, what else can I do with it?', 'I want to archive my Flight of the Heron and Kidnapped fic somewhere where no one can tell me they know better than I do what the fandom is called' and 'hmm, it'd be nice to have some kind of permanent place to put all this stuff I'm digging up about FotH and D. K. Broster', and the recent Things happening to do with AO3 have lent it further impetus. I've got a collection of disorganised and half-finished HTML files, which need a lot more organisation before I can do anything with them, and I need to make a decision about the scope of such a site ('everything I'm interested in' is all very well for Dreamwidth, but I feel a proper website ought to be a bit better-defined; but it needs to include at least both FotH and Kidnapped, and fic, meta and general canon/history info; perhaps a broad 'old books about Jacobites' theme?). But it's progressing, somewhat.


So that's enough to keep me busy for a while, and who knows how long any of it will take. But it's good fun :D
regshoe: A grey heron in flight over water (Heron)
In the course of my research for the Flight of the Heron Wikipedia entry I've read various sources about the book and Broster more generally—in literary dictionaries, scholarly books, magazines and various other kinds of publications. Some of these are fairly detailed and pretty interesting, and here are a collection of sources that I hope may be of interest to the fandom!

I've included links to archived copies wherever possible—most of these require an archive.org account in order to read more than a couple of pages. Let me know if you can't access these for any reason—I've got typed-up copies of all the pieces and will happily send any of them to you.

The Horn Book Magazine, volume 5, number 1, February 1929, article by Eleanor Whitney. Short article about Broster, and—most interestingly—a further contribution from Broster herself! This is the only writing of Broster's about her own life and work that I've found, and contains lots of interesting detail both biographical and about her writing process. The ultimate source of this letter is rather mysterious; the Horn Book Magazine claims it was written for them, but a slightly different version of the same letter appears in The Junior Book of Authors in both 1934 and 1951—the latter claiming that it was written for them shortly before her death, which certainly isn't true. Also the Dictionary of Literary Biography (see below) quotes bits from it alongside other quotes not in it, describing the source as an 'undated typescript for a speech' in St Hilda's College archives, and Diana Wallace (also see below) cites something that sounds like this piece as a source for information that isn't in it; which suggests there's yet another, longer and more detailed, version of the same piece in the college archives.

Mrs Beer's House by Patricia Beer, 1968; pp. 115-118, 185-186. This is one of several autobiographies to mention Flight of the Heron as an important part of the young author's reading, but it's by far the most detailed, and it's generally delightful. Beer is the earliest instance I've found of someone definitely recognising the homoeroticism of Ewen/Keith; she also shares our mystification over the short word beginning with S which BPC was going to call Ewen in that one scene, and includes some of her teenage poetry inspired by Loch na h-Iolaire!

Twentieth Century Romance and Gothic Writers, edited by James Vinson and D. L. Kirkpatrick, entry written by E. F. Bleiler, 1982. Not very detailed, but a nice overview, and I agree with their assessment of the ending of The Dark Mile.

Dictionary of Literary Biography, Volume 160: British Children’s Writers, 1914-1960, edited by Donald R. Hettinga and Gary D. Schmit, entry written by Ruth Waterhouse, 1996. This is one of the longest and most thorough sources, covering all Broster's books (except Child Royal, which is inexplicably skipped) and her life in some detail; it's well-researched, using material from St Hilda's College archives, and contains some thoughtful discussion of the books and their themes. Waterhouse says some interesting things about Flight of the Heron, treats Almond, Wild Almond more sympathetically than I'm inclined to—making some decent points, though I can't quite agree—and, somewhat oddly, views both Ships in the Bay! and World Under Snow as entirely comic/parodic works.

The Cambridge Guide to Women's Writing in English, edited by Germaine Greer and Elaine Showalter, entry written by Valerie Purton, 1999. I'm not impressed with this piece, which contains multiple minor factual errors and rather badly misrepresents the themes of Flight of the Heron (yes, gentlemanly values are important, but the one crucial point where Keith despises 'womanishness' in himself it's clearly an incorrect judgement of something good, and I don’t think Ewen frames his gentlemanly values in a particularly misogynistic way. And the characterisation is so not simplistic!).

Contemporary Authors, edited by Scot Peacock, 2003. The writer of this entry gets an impressive amount about the books wrong (did you know that the main characters of The Wounded Name are on opposite sides of the Napoleonic Wars—we're not informed whether Aymar or Laurent is the Bonapartist, sadly—or that Raoul des Sablières is actually an Englishman???) and has relied heavily on the Dictionary of Literary Biography for the rest, but also includes some biographical details that haven't turned up anywhere else, and frustratingly without citing any primary sources.

The Woman's Historical Novel by Diana Wallace, 2005, pp. 7, 29, 33-34. While limited in scope, this is one of the most fascinating sources I know of, and it's therefore particularly frustrating that it doesn't seem to be archived online anywhere. Message me if you'd like a copy of the relevant passages! Wallace discusses the homoeroticism of The Flight of the Heron in the broader context of women's writing about relationships between men and oblique representations of sexuality; she argues that the fantasy element in the book, the prophecy foretelling Ewen and Keith's meetings, gives this forbidden, repressed attraction an opportunity for subtextual expression.

Out of the Attic: Some Neglected Children’s Authors of the Twentieth Century, edited by Pat Pinsent, entry by Chris Clark, 2006. This is the longest and most scholarly discussion of Broster's work I've found, and contains a lot of food for thought. It compares Broster's writing to that of another historical novelist, Cynthia Harnett (I only skimmed the parts about Harnett, not having read any of her books, but I may have to see if I can find them at some point!), and analyses the sentence-level craft of The Flight of the Heron and The Gleam in the North in great detail. Clark articulates a lot of things about Broster's writing style and characterisation that I was vaguely aware of but hadn't laid out for myself this explicitly, which is interesting, and I think they've also (unintentionally; there's no discussion of the homoeroticism here) put their finger on why Ewen is such a satisfying character to slash, which is perhaps slightly less obvious than why Keith is. They also speculate about why Broster's popularity has waned and why she might appeal less to modern readers.

The History of British Women’s Writing, 1920-1945 (Volume Eight), edited by Maroula Joannou, in a chapter by Diana Wallace, 2013. Largely a less detailed restatement of Wallace's ideas from her own book (see above), but a nice succinct statement (and available on archive.org!).

Wikipedia!

Apr. 2nd, 2023 04:15 pm
regshoe: A grey heron in flight over water (Heron)
As promised, here is D. K. Broster's article with an infobox and picture added (I went with photo 2 in the end, which won the poll and was also my favourite).

And here is a brand new shiny article for The Flight of the Heron! I am very pleased with this; writing this article has been an excellent opportunity to do some detailed research about the book and its history, and I hope that having the information nice and accessible on Wikipedia will bring more people's attention to this wonderful book.

I have turned up various interesting and amusing things while doing the research for the FotH article, and I'll probably make another post or two about these soon.

By far the hardest part of the article to write was the 'Themes' section, because of course if you ask me to write about the themes of my favourite book I will naturally try to bring in my own thoughts and judgements about it, but everything on Wikipedia has to be clearly linked to a cited source—'original research' is not allowed. Turns out there has been a decent amount of sensible stuff written about the themes of FotH, but arranging it all was a good challenge.

If there's anything there that's wrong, missing or if you have another fact that simply must be added, please go and edit it in! One important thing I haven't included is a picture; the main picture in a book's article is supposed to be the cover of the most significant edition, usually the first edition, but the first edition of FotH has a plain cloth cover and I'm not sure what else to do (besides just using the title page, which is a bit boring). Does anyone have a significantly early edition with some nice cover art that you'd like to use?

“Mr Rowl” already has an article (although the title is wrong; I mean to fix that at some point), so perhaps I'll do The Wounded Name next. :D
regshoe: Close-up of a grey heron, its beak open as if laughing (Heron 2)
As promised, a happier post!

I have plans afoot regarding Flight of the Heron, of which more anon, but for now I thought I’d share some of the more amusing things I’ve found in the course of my research.

Reviews and inspirations )
regshoe: A row of old books in a wooden bookshelf (Bookshelf)
At long last, I have acquired a first edition of The Flight of the Heron! This brings my number of physical copies to three. The first two are a 1993 paperback omnibus edition of FotH and its sequels, which is nice enough but it's a bit unwieldy and I don't really want the other two books right there whenever I'm reading FotH, and a 1979 hardback from the original publisher with an impressive list of 'reprinted' years on the copyright page, which is nice enough as a physical book but which has picked up a lot of printing errors over those years of new reprints; that neither of these was really ideal was one of my reasons for wanting to get a first edition. It is in fact a very nice book, a fairly typical-looking early twentieth-century cloth-bound hardback, in decent condition, and well-formatted in details in the way that ebooking has given me a new appreciation for.

Another reason for wanting a first edition was, in fact, ebooking; as you all know there is an ebook on Canadian public domain ebook site Faded Page, but there's none as yet on Project Gutenberg, and for copyright law reasons it's not possible just to transfer the Faded Page ebook across. It seems a bit of a waste of effort to start from scratch making a new ebook for Gutenberg, but—Gutenberg being the biggest and best-known public domain ebook site—I think it might be worth doing. We'll see.

Another reason for wanting a first edition is that it—and, apparently, no subsequent editions—has a really nice map on the endpapers, which [personal profile] luzula has posted a picture of. This is useful!

The location of Ardroy can, as I've posted about before, be deduced fairly precisely from the text; it corresponds to a real small glen in between Glengarry and Lochiel's lands around Loch Arkaig. The map agrees with this location, though I think it gets the shape of Loch na h-Iolaire wrong. It shows the loch as an oblong angled east-west and about twice as long as it is wide, whereas Broster describes it as 'little more than a mile long, and at its greatest breadth perhaps a quarter of a mile wide'; that it points roughly north-south is suggested by the shape of the real glen, and I think can also be inferred from the text (in chapter 1.2 Ewen and Keith approach the house of Ardroy from the pass in the southeast corner of the real glen by going west, 'in the face of the sunset afterglow', and reach the house by 'skirting the end of the little lake'). Other things we can infer about the loch: it has a 'northern shore', on which Lachlan is standing in the prologue, so is probably blunt rather than pointy at the northern end; the creag ruadh is on the western bank near the middle (in the prologue Ewen and Alison sit '[b]etween the red crag and the spot where he had rated his foster-brother that morning', and Ben Tee is on the far side of the loch). The Allt Buidhe burn is crossed in going from Achnacarry to the house of Ardroy; possibly it's a tributary of the real Abhainn Chia-aig. It might have the same course as the real Allt Coire Odhar Beag, which flows from east to west across the southern end of the glen, or it might flow out of the loch to join Abhainn Chia-aig.

The map also shows a second fictional location, that of Ben Loy/Beinn Laoigh: according to the map it's here, just north of where the River Tarff starts to bend southwest. I think this is consistent with the text: in chapter 3.3 Keith leaves the military road between Inverness and Fort Augustus 'just before the road reared itself from the levels of Whitebridge to climb to its highest elevation', hoping to find a short cut to the Corryarrick; Guthrie's camp is on the military road between Fort Augustus and the Corryarrick, 'some miles from the top of the pass'; on the way there from Beinn Laoigh Keith and Guthrie cross the Tarff, and on the way back the distance is 'not so great as he [Keith] had feared'. Beinn Laoigh is therefore north of the Tarff, west of the Corryarrick, and sufficiently far west that the road—which at this point is heading southeast towards the pass—is not too far away. I might put it slightly further west than the map, but I think the map's location is about as good as we can do. In real life there's a sort of plateau here with several small tarns above where the ground rises steeply from the river; I suppose in the book's geography the slope might be more gentle near the river (it doesn't seem to be very precipitous on Keith and Guthrie's journey) with more of a mountain summit further up.

Finally, a minor mystery! My omnibus copy of the book has a footnote to chapter 5.5 saying that Morar is pronounced 'Móar', which puzzled me slightly because that's definitely not how it's pronounced now. But Christopher Duffy in Fight for a Throne lists the same silent-R pronunciation in an appendix of regional and period pronunciations, and I was willing to accept Broster's and Duffy's combined authority for that being the correct period pronunciation. But in the first edition the footnote says 'Mórar' with the first R still intact—and, looking back through my other copies, it's also that way in the 1979 hardback, while the Faded Page ebook appears not to have the footnote at all. So where does this leave us? Perhaps it's a printing error in the omnibus—but then it's a bit funny that a printing error accidentally recreates what is, according to Duffy, a real historical pronunciation. Perhaps it's a printing error in the first edition which was later corrected—but then why is the original version still there in the 1979 hardback? Part of the mystery is that I'm not at all sure what distinction 'Mórar' as opposed to 'Morar' is supposed to communicate to an English speaker—the only thing I can think of is putting the stress on the first syllable rather than the second, which I think most people would do anyway—and this inclines me to think it's an error. This is odd! If any of you have other editions of the book, what do they have here?
regshoe: A grey heron in flight over water (Heron)
I had great fun writing some stories for [community profile] threesentenceficathon a few weeks ago. After the first few days of the ficathon I ran out of steam and got distracted by other stuff, but I'm pleased to have done these—it's definitely a good challenge trying to tell a story in three sentences.

Sunrise at Bretton (139 words) by regshoe
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell - Susanna Clarke
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Characters: Vinculus
Additional Tags: Backstory, 3 Sentence Ficathon
Summary:

Vinculus contemplates his destiny.



And know not now what name to call myself (134 words) by regshoe
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Armadale - Wilkie Collins
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: Main Allan Armadale/Ozias Midwinter | Allan Armadale
Characters: Ozias Midwinter | Allan Armadale, Main Allan Armadale
Additional Tags: 3 Sentence Ficathon, Post-Canon
Summary:

On the meaning of Ozias's names.



(I am totally writing more Armadale fic, by the way—these two are the actual cutest and the book is amazingly good fun, and it deserves to have way more slash fic than exists so far).

On the White Sand (110 words) by regshoe
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Flight of the Heron - D. K. Broster
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Characters: Ewen Cameron, Keith Windham
Additional Tags: Character Death Fix, 3 Sentence Ficathon
Summary:

Another chance.

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