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Date: Nov. 21st, 2021 10:52 am (UTC)Yes, that's a good point—Keith's obliviousness and confusion about his own feelings really follows from his observation of his own actions, it doesn't keep him from acting on those feelings. It's a good tangle.
And oh, yes, the atmospheric details here are really well done too.