regshoe: Close-up of a grey heron, its beak open as if laughing (Heron 2)
More The Wounded Name fic! I was inordinately amused by this idea when it occurred to me, and so I had to write it...

Pinioned bravely defiant to a tree (1542 words) by regshoe
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: The Wounded Name - D. K. Broster
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: Laurent de Courtomer/Aymar de la Rocheterie
Characters: Laurent de Courtomer, Aymar de la Rocheterie
Additional Tags: Post-Canon, Established Relationship, Art
Summary:

Aymar and Laurent run into an old acquaintance at an art exhibition.



(Hmm, 'Laurent de Courtomer' is now a canonical tag but 'Aymar de la Rocheterie' isn't, and neither is the relationship tag—all three have been used on exactly the same fics. I suppose tags appear to the wranglers at random and this is just what's been got through so far?)
regshoe: A Jacobite white rose (White rose)
Here it is! I am delighted to post the first Wounded Name fic on AO3—may there be many more :D

Thou didst ever hold me in thy heart (2406 words) by regshoe
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: The Wounded Name - D. K. Broster
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: Laurent de Courtomer/Aymar de la Rocheterie
Characters: Aymar de la Rocheterie, Laurent de Courtomer
Additional Tags: Fluff, First Time
Summary:

Aymar has been found innocent of treachery by the court of enquiry, and his 'wounded name' is cleared at last. But one thing is wanting to complete his happiness...



With this story, I have (just about) surpassed my total posted wordcount for last year, and it's not even Yuletide yet! This Write Every Day stuff is good for me.
regshoe: Close-up of a grey heron, its beak open as if laughing (Heron 2)
Recently I decided to re-read The Wounded Name. Until maybe two-thirds of the way through I felt about it pretty much how I felt last time, except that it was nice to get to know the book better and appreciate the details a bit more, as one does on a re-read—it is really a pretty good and enjoyable book, and I like both Laurent and Aymar. (Summary for new FotH fans and anyone else who's curious: if you like Flight of the Heron but think it has too much plot getting in the way of the really important things like slashy hurt/comfort, you'll love The Wounded Name). And then, with these gradually warming feelings, somewhere around the trial sequence I had a bit of a change of heart, and decided that I actually like the book and the characters really quite a lot, I do in fact ship Aymar/Laurent, and really, the canon romance is pretty much an ignorable non-issue, isn't it, it's not worth worrying that much about.

The shippy details in the hurt/comfort section are really nice, of course, and—while Laurent's overwhelming adoration for Aymar is perhaps too obvious to be really interesting on first reading—this time I especially appreciated noticing how far Aymar returns his feelings (that postscript, oh my goodness). Sometimes amongst all these fraught enemy ships you just want some nice uncomplicated friends-to-lovers sweetness, y'know? And, well, I thought someone ought to write fic about them, and (as far as I can find) no one has yet, so I decided I would do it and now have 2,500 words of draft fic. I suspect this won't last, but it's nice in the meantime.

Have I mentioned before that Aymar and Laurent's relationship is really slashy? Possibly not, but in any case, I was kind of amused to think how differently I'd read this sort of thing if it was, say, Mary Renault instead of D. K. Broster writing:
They were nearer to each other that evening than they had ever been before. Afterwards, Laurent thought that had Aymar not been so spent in body and so quivering in soul he would probably have told him his secret. As it was, he lay silent on his bed and watched the sky through the window, and Laurent watched him, and had a kind of happiness from it.
...Even so, awww. <3

And I mean, really, look at this:
"...And if only you had the famous jartier back we could try the effects of that on the Prussians."

"But I have got it back," confessed Aymar, "and it is mended, and I am wearing it at this moment. It is at your service."

"Mended, eh?" said d'Andigné. "Magically, no doubt?"

Aymar suddenly wheeled round and put his hand on Laurent's shoulder. "Yes, magically," he said. "He mended it . . . like a good many other things."

His smile pretty well finished Laurent.
...really.

A few other random points:


  • I also love the scenes where they're reading together, especially the bit with Aymar sitting in a chair on the lawn and peacefully stroking Laurent's hair (have I mentioned, etc.) Perhaps I should read The Vicar of Wakefield? I should get more book recs from Broster; there are a few others in her books (Rasselas in "Mr Rowl", for instance) and I'm sure she has good taste.

  • As I think [personal profile] garonne, who made the ebook for this one, has mentioned—it is really noticeable how many... dramatic... ellipses... there are in this book. Way more than in FotH, very obviously. So I looked at the numbers and confirmed that TWN in fact has an average of 6.4 ellipses per 1,000 words, indeed much more than FotH at 3.5 per 1,000 words. So there you go! Perhaps the uninhibited use of dramatic punctuation goes along with the uninhibited iddiness of the content.

  • Reading chapter 13, I was mildly baffled at what seemed the strange choice of holding a military trial in a hotel—why would they do that? But then I learnt, from another book full of gratuitous French which I happened to be reading, that 'Hôtel de Ville' is French for 'town hall'. So that clears that one up. *facepalm*

  • I appreciate Broster making the point, through Mme de la Rocheterie, that conservative sexual mores in the early nineteenth century means being more permissive than typical modern young people. I wonder how she'd feel about Aymar/Laurent if she found out?

  • Oh yeah, there's also the bit where Aymar gets nicknamed Saint Sebastian. By the soldiers at the château where he's held prisoner, because he was tied to a tree and shot, not because he's an artistic homoerotic icon. But it's kind of funny anyway.
regshoe: A grey heron in flight over water (Heron)
Oh, boy.

The Wounded Name (1922), D. K. Broster's fifth novel and third solo novel, continues the theme of post-Revolutionary French history begun in the earlier books—we've now made it to the Restoration and the Hundred Days—and also continues some other very distinctive common themes of her writing. Some of these are good.

So, it's 1815. Napoleon has been vanquished and a Bourbon is back on the throne, but, as they used to say on Horrible Histories, not for long. Laurent de Courtomer, a young Frenchman who grew up in England following his family's emigration and has just returned to his ancestral home, goes off to join the forces fighting in the Vendée against Napoleon's comeback. He's captured by the Imperialists and locked up in an appropriated château, where he meets a fellow-prisoner in a far less fortunate state than he—a Breton leader named Aymar de la Rocheterie, alias L'Oiseleur (the Fowler—a reference to a local legend which he's supposedly recapitulating), whom Laurent met in England the year before and immediately fell head over heels for. Laurent happily takes on the duty of tenderly nursing Aymar back to health, but as he does so, he becomes aware that a terrible secret lies behind Aymar's injuries and captivity—everyone is saying he did something horrifyingly dishonourable, something Laurent is sure he would never do. In between a frankly silly amount of indulgent hurt/comfort and fraught questions of honour, all is revealed...

(...also, like, the battle of Waterloo happens, somewhere, and Napoleon is defeated again, I guess? I don't know, it isn't really important when we've got all this homoerotic hurt/comfort and honour-related drama to get through. Truly, D. K. Broster is the anti-Victor Hugo.)

The plot is in three rough sections (although, oddly, this book isn't divided into Parts the way most of Broster's books are—instead it has a smaller number of much longer chapters). The first is the ridiculous hurt/comfort-slashy-honour bit, in which Laurent and Aymar go through various trials and adventures while imprisoned by and escaping from the Imperialists; it ends with Aymar finally revealing what the horrible dishonourable thing everyone keeps saying he's done was, and why he can't deny having done it. Then there's a middle section in which, Aymar being partly recovered and Waterloo making it easier for Royalists to move around in the open, he goes home and some het romance happens, but the vital question of his 'wounded name' is not resolved. Finally, Aymar sets out to restore his reputation and prove that he acted honourably after all, stalwartly defended by Laurent, and we get some great tense courtroom scenes and miraculous plot twists. In some ways the structure felt a bit disjointed, and the POV is very uneven, with the entire first part from Laurent's perspective and Aymar suddenly becoming a POV character later on.

...So, this is a really slashy book. It's a lot more than your typical 'this historical male friendship reads as kind of romantic to a modern audience'. Laurent's feelings for Aymar in the early part of the book are all but textually romantic—from their first meeting Laurent is constantly thinking about how handsome he is, treasuring every time Aymar smiles at him or honours him with a greater confidence than he gives other people, and later on, the way the narrative describes their growing closeness during the hurt/comfort section really doesn't read like the friendship Broster keeps insisting it is. (Is this what they did in the 1920s instead of 'gal pals'???) She even does the 'one character in a chair, the other sitting on the floor with their head against the first character's knee' thing she likes so much with her textual het romances! I didn't strongly ship it the way I do Ewen/Keith (IMO it isn't as interesting a relationship in itself), but it's impossible not to see it that way. To the point that it never rising above subtext felt almost dishonest—like, the relationship obviously ought to go that way, and it's so obvious that it not doing so is frankly unconvincing and unsatisfying.

Grumbling about canon het )

This book is by far the most similar to Flight of the Heron of any of Broster's other books so far; it kind of reads like Broster was testing out the ideas that she'd later develop to their full potential in FotH. The first part is basically an extended version of the 'Ewen gives away Lochiel's hiding-place by sleep-talking, and Keith comforts him while he's injured and a prisoner' section from FotH (I was almost afraid that the big reveal was going to be that Aymar gave away the information about his plans by talking in his sleep—there is in fact some sleep-talking involved elsewhere in the plot—but happily it's a bit more involved and ingenious than that!). There's the same emphasis on folkloric fate, although less tightly bound up with the plot and less interestingly written. And Aymar is... not quite the same character as Ewen, but they certainly have an awful lot in common. (Laurent is nothing like Keith, however—he's a much less well-developed character). And, while Broster's love of historical detail is certainly here, the historical setting isn't nearly as detailed or as cleverly woven together with the plot and characters as it is in FotH.

What else is there to say about this book? There are some good side characters—M. Perrelet, the irritable but indulgently good-hearted doctor who cares for Aymar during his captivity and comes to like and admire both him and Laurent (also in FotH links, the way Archibald Cameron is written in that book is much the same character type) is a fave. And Colonel Richard, the Imperialist officer to whom Aymar supposedly betrayed his own side, somewhat surprisingly turns out to be a great 'honourable enemy' character. The trial scenes towards the end of the book are properly gripping, even if the big reveal about a certain character's real identity is a little contrived.

On the whole, I didn't really enjoy this one, partly because I couldn't get over that horrible falsehood about the central relationships and partly because of how much it reads like a less well-executed beta version of my great love Flight of the Heron. But I think this is an unfair opinion—it's really a pretty good book, and I can recommend it for anyone who wants to see the best, even if amongst other things, of D. K. Broster's writing.

...Anyway, now I'm going to go and write another few hundred words of Ewen/Keith fic!

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