What is right and what is wrang, a short sword and a lang, a weak arm and a strang for to draw...
Welcome back to the read-along! This week's chapters are getting a bit more serious, historically and for our characters...
Next week we'll read the first two chapters of Part II.
Welcome back to the read-along! This week's chapters are getting a bit more serious, historically and for our characters...
Next week we'll read the first two chapters of Part II.
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Date: Oct. 16th, 2021 05:19 pm (UTC)I do like the scene with Alison and Keith, she first trying to figure out the 'enigma', and then Keith, after being so sardonic all through last week's chapters, so earnest and concerned for Ewen (after initially seriously doubting his good intentions, ' Alison met his eyes, and they convinced her of his sincerity')—
—and it's not just an act of sincerity that he's putting on for the sake of being courteous to a lady, because she noticed how nobly sad he was looking while he was gazing out at the loch before he saw her—
—but misunderstanding both Ewen and Alison so badly! For all that he's their enemy, Keith seems to feel very little actual political enmity towards the Jacobites as a party, here or anywhere else in the novel; he simply thinks they're wasting their effort and risking their lives pointlessly, 'blinded and besotted' into actually believing in their political aims, which to Keith is as silly as believing in other people. It's perhaps an interesting view for someone whose job is to take an active part in fighting against them!
I also like the religious details we get in chapter 5. A quick historical summary for anyone who's not familiar with the background here: after the Reformation the established church in England is Anglican, basically Protestant but also kind of Catholic but very importantly not Roman Catholic; that of Scotland (the Kirk) is Presbyterian, rather more Protestant. A minority in Scotland are Episcopalian, theologically similar to the Church of England but institutionally separate; there are also Roman Catholics in both Scotland and England, as well as various smaller Protestant sects. The more Catholic denominations—including the Scottish Episcopalians—tend to be more in favour of the Jacobites, and the Jacobites' Protestant enemies like to portray them as trying to bring the country under the tyranny of Rome. Anyway, pasting 'James' over the 'George' in religious books is something Episcopalian Jacobites really did! Keith and Aunt Margaret's conversation about sermons and Morning Prayer is good fun; as for Bishop Jeremy Taylor, he was a seventeenth-century Royalist clergyman and famous writer on religious subjects; and, not to give anything away, he will return later on...
Bringing those two subjects together, 'the analogy which occurred to him' is an... interesting moment—perhaps a subtle comment from the omniscient narrator on Keith's political scepticism?
I absolutely love Keith's constant refrain in these two chapters of what are these feelings?? why do I CARE about him so much???. Poor man really doesn't know what to do with genuine emotion, does he—and for much of chapter 6 he's lost in a very confused mixture of the sincerity of chapter 5 and more sardonic teasing of Ewen, which by now Keith has turned into quite an art, with 'pleasure of pursuing it'. But Ewen does get his own back with that little comment about High Bridge, and I love the interplay between them, wobbling as it does between enemies and friends, sincerity and sarcasm—the bit where Keith actually tells Ewen what he's been so confusedly thinking about him for the past several days, '"I vow ’twould give me pleasure to think that we might one day encounter each other again."', thinks that Ewen won't take this as meant genuinely and immediately veers off into joking about it is a lovely bit of conversational complexity. 'Enigma' was the right word! But yes, 'civilised young barbarian' and 'my own young Achilles' and so on—no, Keith, I'm sure I haven't a clue why you're so sorry to say farewell to Ewen either...
Even at the end of the chapter Keith looks at Ewen 'with a smile which held both amusement and liking'—and his note mixes sincere liking, the honour of a soldier and a good deal of snark.
Keith dressing himself up in Ewen's Highland clothes is also good fun! Here is a video demonstrating the complexity and general usefulness when worn correctly of the plaid—although this is a belted plaid/great kilt, where kilt and plaid consist of a single piece of cloth, whereas Ewen wears a separate kilt or philabeg, which was becoming more popular by this point in the eighteenth century.
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Date: Oct. 16th, 2021 06:59 pm (UTC)It's perhaps an interesting view for someone whose job is to take an active part in fighting against them! Is it? He strikes me very much as a professional soldier, aiming himself where he's pointed, and not having much feeling about any of it. It's a profession, no more and no less.
And yes, so many feelings! And so many possessives for Ewen: "my Warrior," too along with the rest.
his note mixes sincere liking, the honour of a soldier and a good deal of snark. I shook my head over that. Had to lob one last dart, did you, Keither? Just say you like the man, and stop pulling his pigtails.
I did feel bad for Ewen on finding his prisoner had fled, though. There's something almost domestic about their arrangement over the previous week (Keith offering his cloak to Ewen!), and I daresay Ewen had settled into the seeming of it, and momentarily forgot its truth. Poor Ewen! I suspect Keith is right, that the experience has taught Ewen not to make that oversight again, and I hope that in one of their subsequent meetings there will be more domesticity between them...
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Date: Oct. 16th, 2021 09:09 pm (UTC)The scene with Alison and Keith was lovely - possibly one of my favourites so far. We've mostly only seen both of them interact with Ewen, so it added a new dimension to their personalities, and it was really endearing that they're both trying so hard to meet the other half-way, even if it fails.
Keith's feelings about the Jacobites worked really well for me - it feels like the natural result of his kindness coupled with his 'ugh, look at these savages' attitude from the earlier chapters. Even though I don't know much about this period of history, I know how things shake out, so everything has a kind of...dramatic irony? And I like that both sides are a bit wrong in their ideas about what's going to happen, it makes everything feel more complicated and human.
Keith's pining was so good, wasn't it? It really does read like he's repressing his attraction, especially with the way every chapter includes at least one reference to how fine Ewen looks in his kilt, and so on. And 'conversational complexity' is a perfect way to describe it! There's been a bit about Keith's backstory, but I like actually seeing the consequences on the page, where he can't help but say something heartfelt, but then he kind of shies away from the intimacy of it?
Thank you for that really helpful video! I was struggling a bit to visualise that part, about as much as Keith was struggling to actually put it on. :D That explains all the stuff about sitting on and sleeping on his plaid, although I'm still very sceptical of Ewen's claim that wet plaid is warmer.
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Date: Oct. 18th, 2021 05:57 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: Oct. 16th, 2021 09:04 pm (UTC)And I am delighted by all Keith's pigtail pulling, which he can't seem to stop himself from doing. He veers back and forth between that and sincerity in such a confused fashion! Oh, Keith. And then there's that bit about the rain, used as a device to tell the reader all about the backstory that made him into the person he is...
I remember the first time I read these chapters I found the religious stuff pretty dense, so good for
I thought I'd share some stuff about names which I already wrote up for
Oh, and also I wanted to rec some short fics which take place early in canon, and which you can read now, if you want!
Calltainneach. I think this is
What Makes Heroic Strife, where
The Tools at Hand by me. This is a glimpse of Ewen from Lochiel's POV.
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Date: Oct. 16th, 2021 09:21 pm (UTC)That makes sense about the naming conventions. I thought calling him 'Ardroy' sounded overly formal, but if it was normal even for the gentry then it feels a bit more natural. I can well believe there are dozens more Ewen Camerons, especially since every third character so far has been a Cameron. And first names tend to be passed around within families, so I bet Lochiel has several more relatives called 'Ewen', lol.
Ooh, recs! *bookmarks*
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Date: Oct. 16th, 2021 11:39 pm (UTC)Most definitely! :D
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Date: Oct. 17th, 2021 12:53 am (UTC)Thank you for this explanation of the names! So many different characters with similar names... and so many characters who have multiple names.
Also thank you for the fic recs!
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Date: Oct. 17th, 2021 08:05 am (UTC)no subject
Date: Oct. 17th, 2021 10:24 am (UTC)Thank you for writing up the explanation about names! I don't think I actually knew what 'Eoghain Mhoir' means, or that it's in the vocative. Yes, first and last names are not terribly unique—reading about Jacobite history has involved a certain amount of confusion over which of the many different Donald MacDonalds etc. we're dealing with now. (Actually, I've just read a totally unrelated book, from the twentieth century, whose protagonist is called Donald Cameron, and his father is Ewan Cameron (albeit with an A), which I thought was funny).
And thanks for the fic recs :D (hehe, I like that summary of 'Calltainneach'...)
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Date: Oct. 24th, 2021 05:56 pm (UTC)yay fic reccs!
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Date: Oct. 16th, 2021 10:33 pm (UTC)I love the line about the orange seaweed along Loch Eil. DKB saw that in person, there's no doubt in my mind.
The scene in the hut is one of my favourites. It fits so much backstory in, and the device of the journal keeps us up to date with the campaign. And Ewen just going to sleep with Keith in the hut, with his broadsword close at hand, is lovely - he has total confidence in Keith not to do anything dastardly.
The 1969 TV adaptation makes a pretty good contrast between Keith's wearing of the plaid - he looks a real mess - and Lachlan doing it properly, all neat pleats and elegantly-draped fabric. Very funny. I don't think the series is up on Youtube any more, and I have no idea how to get it there. But that scene is gold.
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Date: Oct. 17th, 2021 10:28 am (UTC)Yes, that detail stood out to me too! Such lovely and specific nature descriptions.
Ah, the TV adaptation! I still haven't seen it—perhaps I should actually get the DVDs one of these days...
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Date: Oct. 17th, 2021 08:12 am (UTC)I can't remember where I read this now, but apparently wool has an exothermic reactions with water, so wringing the plaid out in water would actually make it warmer to sleep in - a wonderful little detail that Broster gets right there.
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Date: Oct. 17th, 2021 10:45 am (UTC)wool has an exothermic reactions with water, so wringing the plaid out in water would actually make it warmer to sleep in
Oh, nice! That would make sense.
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Date: Oct. 18th, 2021 05:52 pm (UTC)Keith finally gets a change of clothes for his escape! He’s been wearing the same uniform for— around a week now? Also the wig, he’s been wearing a WIG the whole time he’s been held captive?! I’m assuming regular laundry wasn’t a feature of daily life even when not a prisoner, but… did they have changes of underclothes, at least? The contents of Ewen’s luggage seem to indicate yes. But maybe I don’t want to know.
…I like how much meaner they are too each other in these chapters. They should continue being mean, in my humble opinion.
Some very successful acting on Ewan’s part at the end, there. He very conveniently forgot that Keith’s parole was expiring, and just happened to leave him alone in a room with everything he would need to escape undetected… how very unfortunate!
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Date: Oct. 18th, 2021 06:30 pm (UTC)They are not wearing any underwear. : D I mean, obviously Ewen has nothing on underneath his kilt, but Keith doesn't have underwear in the modern sense, either.
That is, they have quite long and billowy shirts which they tuck round the groin under the breeches, and that function sort of as underwear. This video shows an 18th century gentleman getting dressed, and Keith's uniform is on the same basic pattern.
And women are also not wearing any underwear. I tried to do research on what they did when they got their period, and the answer is apparently mostly "bleed on their shifts"? They had lots of skirt layers. But I suppose most of the population was kind of underfed and thus bled less?
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Date: Oct. 20th, 2021 04:24 am (UTC)I'm a little confused about Keith calling Ewen "Ardroy." Is that the name of the clan? Also the whole Achilles part.
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Date: Oct. 20th, 2021 05:28 pm (UTC)XD
Ah, don't worry, Keith, Fate has already decided that you'll get to see Ewen again...
See
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Date: Oct. 22nd, 2021 01:00 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: Oct. 22nd, 2021 05:40 pm (UTC)Also, though Broster certainly does focus on the noble side of things, there is a bit more grim consequences of war later on in the book, if that's more your thing. I didn't quote 'Ye Jacobites By Name' for nothing...
Yeah, I think there were two herons, unless the one Lachlan killed magically came back to life. Which is possible, I suppose!
Most of all I appreciate learning more about a story that I know is important to you.
Aww, thank you! :)
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